i feel a little awful for rehashing the rather obvious point of "OMG U ARE SO GOOD SARA UUUUGH RUBBING YOUR WRITING ALL OVER MY UNWORTHY FACE :OOO" which all of cnc undoubtedly knows and agrees with (because i am the spokesperson of everyone ever, apparently)

but really, it's an awfully accurate point. you're a talented writer, your edward is so deep and so noteable that dc ought to take a very good and hard look at your characterization and consider it, you're astute and admirable oocly and icly so, yeah.